intense eye meetings
like birds chattering in spring
walk on the bay bridge
under the cluster of stars
unbroken sequence of love
Great poem, beautiful rhythm and a wonderful ending, the flow is stunning!
It is very beautiful poem about love. Thank You sir for sharing such a beautiful poem. कुछ अनकहीं बातें दिल को छू जाती हैं, बिना कुछ कह बहुत कुछ कह जाती हैं।
Wow so well written within the limitation of Tanka 5-7-5-7-7 syllables.. Thumbs Up.
Like birds chattering in spring....endearing poetic expression! A beautiful Tanka.........10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Outstanding Tanka, i liked it very much.