Taste The Journey Poem by Randhir kaur

Taste The Journey

Rating: 5.0


The Days & Nights
are silent,
Only the tears seems
to be violent..
I gave them love and
respect,
A bit of something
least I suspect..
The moments
passed are in glaring
frames,
Some loved me &
others said the
clumsy names..
The dear ones turned
me into aggressive
flames,
My heart warned me
but I did certain
claims..
An irreversible regret
and an unheard
request,
An unspeakable
secret and an
unreachable quest..
Still life is being about
happy anyhow,
So simply summed
up in words, 'LIFE
must go all the way
rest'..

Friday, July 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Enjoy ur life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 10 July 2015

A true poem, with hopeful advice Thanks for sharing, Randhir Peace

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Nosheen Irfan 13 May 2016

A positive outlook on life. Well expressed thoughts.

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Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

Thank you Kelly for your appreciation...

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Randhir Kaur 13 May 2016

Thank you Irfan for your time..Enjoy your life..stay tuned.

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 June 2016

Facing the problems of life with the muse of hope! Thanks for sharing.

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Siddartha Montik 08 May 2017

An unspeakable secret and an unreachable quest.....and That is LIFE must go rest of all the way.. well expressed lines about a Journey! ! Thanks for sharing Poet!

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Randhir Kaur 30 June 2016

Woww..hugs to you..thanks Tye for your wishes..means a lot..keep reading.

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Christopher Tye 24 June 2016

Very heartfelt poem, really enjoyed reading it, keep writing this well and your sure to go far.

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Randhir Kaur 14 June 2016

Thanks Bill for the feedback. Keep reading. Stay tuned..Hugs.

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Bill Cantrell 14 June 2016

Still, life is about being happy anyhow...I enjoyed you poem with a poetic flow of glaring frames in moments passed by, thanks for sharing.

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