A tear falls
multiplies into many
All decide to
run down both cheek
eyes of truth swim
in the crystal waters
Is it pain
or is it joy?
Which brings the waterfall
from the rainbow
of the soul
Maybe it's the heart
opening
-I don't know
whatever it may be
what a beauty to see
all tears are pure
like a dew on a leaf
they bring relief
I like the lei of connected thoughts and its culmination on 'relief'... through tears vanity melts and become dust with dust.. beautiful Kasia
oh! kasia that truly reflects our emtions sometimes we have no choice but to let the tears roll and refresh our cheeks, thanks.
Kasia, your description about the tears is very nice, i love it.
Tears, they contain feelings either joy or sad....but if it happy shed faster, so the rest still remain happy in your eyes but if it because of sad let it down, remove all pain to the ground...so u will have less burden_Unwritten Soul
Ow wow! Stunning artwork...... Is it pain Or is it joy? Which brings the waterfall From the rainbow Of the soul 10++++
Which brings the waterfall from the rainbow of the soul..............all tears are pure....... what a beautiful meditation on tears.... such a great poem with poetic substance. tony
Perfect wording of the tear that herald er of sadness and happiness with a delightful ending...regards
all tears are pure like a dew on a leaf they bring relief They can be refreshing and vital for growing, let the showers become our flowers
It left me speechless...such a simple poem that hits straight to the heart...words seem useless...you have a great mind..lady...shine on! ! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
It left me speechless...such a simple poem that hits straight to the heart...words seem useless...you have a great mind..lady...shine on! ! ! !