Tears Poem by Kasia Fedyk

Tears

Rating: 3.9


A tear falls
multiplies into many

All decide to
run down both cheek
eyes of truth swim
in the crystal waters

Is it pain
or is it joy?

Which brings the waterfall
from the rainbow
of the soul

Maybe it's the heart
opening
-I don't know

whatever it may be
what a beauty to see
all tears are pure
like a dew on a leaf
they bring relief

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Avik Datta Gupta 03 August 2012

It left me speechless...such a simple poem that hits straight to the heart...words seem useless...you have a great mind..lady...shine on! ! ! !

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I like the lei of connected thoughts and its culmination on 'relief'... through tears vanity melts and become dust with dust.. beautiful Kasia

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Lemeriga Andrew 02 August 2012

oh! kasia that truly reflects our emtions sometimes we have no choice but to let the tears roll and refresh our cheeks, thanks.

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Hamid Negah 02 August 2012

Kasia, your description about the tears is very nice, i love it.

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Unwritten Soul 02 August 2012

Tears, they contain feelings either joy or sad....but if it happy shed faster, so the rest still remain happy in your eyes but if it because of sad let it down, remove all pain to the ground...so u will have less burden_Unwritten Soul

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 01 December 2017

Ow wow! Stunning artwork...... Is it pain Or is it joy? Which brings the waterfall From the rainbow Of the soul 10++++

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2016

Which brings the waterfall from the rainbow of the soul..............all tears are pure....... what a beautiful meditation on tears.... such a great poem with poetic substance. tony

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Ken E Hall 05 August 2012

Perfect wording of the tear that herald er of sadness and happiness with a delightful ending...regards

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Kevin Patrick 03 August 2012

all tears are pure like a dew on a leaf they bring relief They can be refreshing and vital for growing, let the showers become our flowers

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Avik Datta Gupta 03 August 2012

It left me speechless...such a simple poem that hits straight to the heart...words seem useless...you have a great mind..lady...shine on! ! ! !

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