Why do we always brood or complain?
When life is full of cares to maintain.
Humans are born with a special set
Something extra to compliment the rest
Instincts are significantly refined
Brain with the grey matter defined
The forbidden fruit, doubts invoked
Intellect and wit, all evoked
Explore and travel the locale unknown
Toil and sweat, make less forlorn
Hide and seek the game designed
Discover the hidden, the decree consigned
The chosen spirits, their stab highlighted
To reveal the secret their souls alighted
Land water and sea, no hemisphere left
All epitomized with enthused depth.
Exploring is a never ending game
The future Gen will do the same
Exchanging the baton to and fro
Find contentment, when secret know
The Past guides with treasures revealed
And Future allures with what concealed
So keep going MAN this is your fate
No time to brood and stretching hate.
My head is nothing but an empty shell Ever ready to let anything new inside Abhaji wonderful... Time is the only constraint But anyway I planned to read you complete
Humans are born with a special set Something extra to compliment the rest These two lines reflect wonderfully that we have a nice gift hidden in us and we have to take it out. Very few people are able to recognize it. Well written.
Mind over matter...thats the process of evolution... You have greatly captured your readers interest in here... Cate
really brings out the whole in you. every person is born to search.good job
So keep going MAN this is your fate No time to brood and stretching hate. Lovely message...loved your message and the poem...well written. Live life without complaint and too short to brood over issues as all will be in vain...
Not hating is a very important component of life, life is more meaningful and you have explained it well.
Thanx for such an exquisite.Quite a good poem.depicts the mad rush in the modern urban civilization.In this Mechanic Age, we all rushing towards something unattainable.we all are running without knowing where are we going. regards.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Ahhh, yes...indeed, the intrigue of the inexplicably mercurial human brain. Man and his science continue to set landmark progress in disentwining the threadings of the minds innerworkings....This topic facinates me to the marrow! Once again you impress, young lady, by displaying your unique penchant and natural largess for diversification, in expanding your theme-scope, and in crisp, smooth & erudite fashion. You have a Seer's sense as to what your readership craves....and you vacuum them in like bees to honey! Very Nice Work. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..