Abha Sharma

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The Abyss - Poem by Abha Sharma

Space and Matter
Infinity define

Innumerous essence around

Heart exulted
Spirits alighted
Passion delineated

Alas!

Time flies

Mood flickers
Reason rambles
Uncertainty broadens

Nothingness sinks

Deep, so deep

Where?


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  • (7/21/2009 9:47:00 PM)


    Nothingness sinks

    Deep, so deep

    Where?

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    We will never be able to explain what we understand from that point. We are only particle into the time womb...
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  • (7/9/2008 1:44:00 AM)


    nice one
    definitely thought provoking
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  • (4/27/2008 7:01:00 AM)


    Question that haunt us all. Where does 'nothingness go'? It feels heavy and appears to give us a 'sinking feeling, ' but how far can it descend? Can it also rise? Your poems are thought-provoking and expertly composed. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • Sadiqullah Khan (4/25/2008 2:18:00 AM)


    we cant help this eternal sinking into that hollowness...dont we have beauty to appreciate, , my view, , (Report) Reply

  • (4/23/2008 6:42:00 PM)


    I am trying to get this, but at this point and time I think I am lost in translation. (Report) Reply

  • (4/22/2008 3:57:00 AM)


    Staccato images, pulsating rhythm and then.... the sinking, sinking, sinking - eternal sinking - perhaps never making contact. A dark, sombre image emanating from an enigmatic labyrinth we can't and perhaps will never understand.

    Making forays - no matter how brief - into that labyrinth to capture images and flesh them out is what true poetry is all about and that - my dear friend - is what you have so graciously done.

    Take care...
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  • (4/6/2008 4:48:00 PM)


    Nothingness sinks

    Deep, so deep

    Where?
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    Into the planck time, where particles relate to each others through magnetic waves that sink meaning and nothingness.
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  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (4/5/2008 3:17:00 AM)


    And then to where doth nothingness go? A very apropos title...quite fitting indeed, as your ideaology on the concept of an Abyss, is in itself intensely inveterating...The theories, and possibilities that blanket this topic, are impossible to validate, and impossible to dismiss....Are they science, or of spirit....Is it astronomical or theological....I have written on this theme, many times....as regardless as to ehat be one's belief or disbelief....it's a facinating topic that, well....has infinite material to write about....I like your employment of short cropt phrasage, as it provides a
    teasing lilt, of surrealistic ambience...which is quite befitting te tone you've set.
    Outstanding work, young lady! You continue to impress!

    ~ FjR ~
    ..2008..
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  • (4/5/2008 2:17:00 AM)


    A great truth so nicely and simply presented! Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (4/4/2008 12:22:00 AM)


    The abyss IS time and matter - at least in a SF sense. But yours is much more interesting, it suggests a happy ending. Rgds, Ivan (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2008 5:38:00 AM)


    where to? to fathomless ignorance...
    to resurgence...
    and to subsequent enlightenment...
    diving deep into an incredible philosophy.
    beautiful write, aabha.
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  • Dr.subhendu Kar (4/2/2008 5:20:00 AM)


    heart when exulted by the essence encircling
    passion seems to razzle by the trainbow
    so deep yet impeccable impinged within
    as the butterfly and its beauty as ephimeral
    by the time yuet not luscious green
    a deep scar yet an abyss as when ingrained
    beneath the time when mystical.luscious green.......................wondeful poem
    while raving in the ours of excellence, i admire the lucid art of expression,10/10, thanks for sharing
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  • (4/2/2008 12:49:00 AM)


    'Deep, Deep, so Deep...WHere? Where? The Abyss' - Inspiring trip :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/1/2008 4:30:00 PM)


    Abyss abyss and mindfull fish down the cave of the abyss explorin darkness with no lease.

    take good care
    roger
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  • (3/31/2008 11:14:00 AM)


    There is such a lot in so few words. Wonderfully mind-expanding!

    F
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  • (3/30/2008 9:35:00 AM)


    A deep philosophical poem but on the ground of reality.It compels us to think with a heavy heart and mind.Complexity of this age can clearly be felt in these few lines. (Report) Reply

  • (3/29/2008 12:04:00 PM)


    I see where you are trying to go with this nice poem...

    It is good just as it is....but you can either the opening with a middle or add more to the end...

    Just advice, hope you do not mind...again, it holds up well as it is

    John
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