Tested By The Fire Poem by Mary Havran

Tested By The Fire

Rating: 4.7


Am I to be tested by fire?
Tempered, as steel, to forge the keener blade
Can I possibly survive?
Emerge from the flame
Purified
Purged

Is such searing necessary?
Must all that I am (or thought I was)
Be melted to the core
And poured out
Liquefied
Molten

Am I to be totally recast?
Refashioned at the anvil by heavy handed blows
So unyielding that I require
This violent a process
Hammered
Pounded

I would choose a milder makeover
The gentler touch
Of potter to the clay
The subtle training
Of gardener to the vine

Is the smithy to be my only master?
If this is the form of refashioning I truly require
Then I shall try to endure
Hopefully
Gratefully

Shall I be made more worthy?
I ask only that the process leave me bettered
By whatever bellows and blows
Keener blade
Finer mettle
Stronger
Truer
Brighter
Tested by the Fire

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorothy- A. Holmes 16 February 2008

Mary, Oh, I love your passion in this poem! Dorothy

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Janice Wabencki 17 February 2008

This is inspiring! Thank you.

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Res John Burman 28 February 2008

I can almost hear the hammers ringing Mary, tempered indeed. Thank you

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Jessel Jane Tevar Toring 21 February 2008

i like this one much...thanks! ! 10 from me.

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L Rickie Sainti 26 February 2008

You have a good poem and it is inspiring for my life situation too.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 07 December 2021

Loveliest Modern Poem Of The Day. CONGRATULATIONS, so passionately and powerfully rendered! 5 Stars!

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Sandra Gloystein 05 November 2017

I love this so much. Thank you.

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Ronell Warren Alman 09 February 2009

Awesome poem Mary! Life for all of us is a big test! Sometimes we have to walk through a hazardous fire to get to the end of the rainbow!

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Jackie Hughes 30 January 2009

I love this poem Great Job!

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Roger Naya 26 March 2008

Hi Mary, very nice poem, how did you get it to be written like that. along the middle?

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