Before The Dawn Poem by Mary Havran

By far the best of today's three poems of the day! Congratulations!

I can just imagine chill from the wind! It was a night! ! !

A wonderful feel to this one Mary, colour seems to play a big part with the sences Thankyou for sharing this Love duncan X

A very strong, enjoyable piece of writing. Ian

beautifully done, strong fierce images. thank you.

i KIND OF LIKE THIS. 'PURCHASE', AS IN 'AN OBTAINING' (OF SOMETHING) ? here i guess referring to obtaining a look at the pink sky. : ) : ) BRI

clouds trimmed in rosy piping which dress the sky at dawn. i love these lines in your poem.... wonderful diction and the use of words... marvelous.. thank you dear Mary the poetess. tony

A Time for Stars! Golden Moon at the centre of Eastern Sky With a bright Star above shines glorious Like in the full Moon time even today sure! Night has settled now with calmness every- Where making it very cold before mist full Formation to go on all the night before all! Before dawn breaks out clearing all darkness Ruling the whole night, it's the time for Stars To draw symbols in constellations far above! All Greek mythological and ancient Indian Group of Stars making zodiac symbols..... Saying all about each one's status and future! All thoughts of past, present and future surely Occupy all as long as all Stars never diminish!

it's before in my place and it's total darkness

Wonderfully expressed poem Mary. Loved all it! Congrats