Thanksgiving Poem by Freespirit Juneja

love it...to me it seems intense love

I like the idea! but, the story seems to be all over the place.

Still have this memory, but back here to remember thou thanksgiving! enjoy the day_Unwritten Soul

The end was made with the sugar coated lines...Curiosity is that exist? ..In a friendship we need no return but enough to see laughing and smiling friend again and again. It's good to see snow is freezing because if it's not freezing then it must melted already hahaha..Joking! I am gonna write my own lines again Your words feed me with prayers No more reason for me to keep hunger O friend thou make the miles become shorter Warrior of my days to embrace life warmer Supper is ready for you to eat Have them as it made from the deep Deep in my heart and deeper inside For thou my friend for keep me bright With your prayers I know u feed me the right Thanks giving us your fondness side _Unwritten Soul

verry good right. i actually really like it. its a nice way to put it all.

easy reading and nice.

Nice poem.... -sanu

Beautifully written free verse poem.

Very nice poem beautiful poem. I like the title of your poem by the name of Thanks giving. Especially I like the ending of your poem the you have ended it. Superb

pla write I had supper not a supper n also say, it was cooked by you