Abdallah Gamal

Rookie - 341 Points (8/June/1995 / Egypt)

That's Why I Miss You - Poem by Abdallah Gamal

A day without u is like a day without its sunshine
If I had a flower for every time I think about u
Then my life will turn to be a forever garden
when I see flowers grow, and the sky is blue
Then I feel that ur return is soon and u 're fine
And when I hear your voice I feel as if I with u
U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind
I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u


Comments about That's Why I Miss You by Abdallah Gamal

  • Cigeng Zhang (12/30/2016 8:34:00 PM)


    A very beautiful love poem. I enjoyed reading it. Keep on writing. (Report) Reply

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  • Chinedu Dike (1/3/2015 4:33:00 AM)


    A well articulated love poem penned from the inner recesses of the heart. A lovely piece indeed. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

  • Cierrah Smiles (9/3/2012 12:05:00 AM)


    I know what you mean that's all i will say.... (Report) Reply

  • Amy Marie (11/6/2011 7:25:00 PM)


    Well, I'm not crazy about the spelling mistakes, but other than that it's not bad. (Report) Reply

  • (8/16/2011 4:47:00 PM)


    Wow the heart is like a camera it will keep those special memories alive...thanks for such wonderful poems... (Report) Reply

  • (8/7/2011 5:56:00 PM)


    i adore you abdallah, really! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Shamin Shah (8/4/2011 1:26:00 PM)


    U may be out of my sight, but never out of my mind
    I just 've look in my heart cuz that’s where I find u

    This is so cute and simply beautiful... the lines reflect the love and true feeling of missing someone...
    keep writing like this
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  • Ingibo Benson (7/28/2011 6:05:00 PM)


    Simple, emotional and sublime. Keep writing Abdallah. (Report) Reply

  • (7/27/2011 4:36:00 AM)


    Hey :) I'm glad you PM'd me. This is a beautiful poem! It connects deeply to me, though I know you weren't writing it for me.

    Just had a little thing with the you's being 'u', but those can be ignored easily. :)

    keep it up!
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  • (7/25/2011 10:36:00 PM)


    another breath taking poem (Report) Reply

  • Urshula Davis (7/8/2011 4:12:00 PM)


    So beautiful! ! ! So nice! ! (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (5/1/2011 1:37:00 PM)


    Where you are right now, I was many times before but I learned the heart and painful ways my lesson and like I said in my poem titled: IN THE PURSUIT OF HAPPINESS, I learned that whenever there is an ending there is a new beginning and what I thought was a great loss turned out to be a blessing from the sky! Love and Peace for always! ... (Report) Reply

  • (4/29/2011 3:49:00 PM)


    When you miss someone its always like the sun has taken back some of its sunlight :)

    Rated 10 :)
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  • Saadat Tahir (4/27/2011 1:45:00 PM)


    simply beautiful

    liked it

    well done

    cheers
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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 1, 2011


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