The Beacon Poem by koyel mitra

The Beacon

Rating: 5.0


I am a lump of clay,
and you are the potter;
Though I am a tool in your hands,
you love me and give various shapes.

Don't make me a toy,
used for children's joy;
For they will tamper with,
my beauty and injure me.

Don't make me an idol,
worshipped by people;
Coz they might desecrate me
when all I want is holiness.

Don't make me a decorative piece
used to embellish museums;
for toadies would flatter me
and lavish me with unwanted praise.

Make me a beacon
that will end sorrow's darkness
by flooding light of happiness
and act as a signal of love!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reetessh Sabrr 26 September 2008

the light of soul hidden inside broought out with sheer pride!

0 0 Reply
Bill Thomas 21 September 2008

Excellent, Koyel: realistic yet hopeful, crafted beautifully - has to be a 10.

0 0 Reply
David Threadgold 15 September 2008

Hi Koyel. A beacon of hope and leading the way to ever greater things must be better than anything else. well done. Regards Dave T.

0 0 Reply
Ivor Hogg 11 September 2008

loved you train of thought although I would be a cup to hold water myself

0 0 Reply
Tom Balch 11 September 2008

This is a very good piece, well penned indeed 10/10 regards Tom

0 0 Reply
Chitra - 14 October 2008

this beacon of poetic lines is the melody of each true soul that ryhmes and you are surely that true soul

0 0 Reply
Rinzu Susan Rajan 05 October 2008

SIGNAL OF LOVE... WHAT A BFUL FORM OF EXPRESSION :)

0 0 Reply
Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

'Make me a beacon that will end sorrow's darkness by flooding light of happiness and act as a signal of love! ' 10 for this moving composition. Marvelous.

0 0 Reply
Viola Grey 28 September 2008

wonderfull use of imagery....quite a heartfelt plea...great work

0 0 Reply
Edgar Andrade Baguio 27 September 2008

Very inspiring to the souls of men...

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success