The best things
have their day
and then a night
of muffled struggle,
until some tiny
movement of the heart
brings back their
eternal clarity
This little gem is packed with truth. Well done, Max. Raynette
I'm a huge fan of your short but poignant poems. Not a word wasted and very meaningful! HBH
Another finely constructed emotive piece, as I begin to see is your forte!
Poetry (?) to a tee. Great work, direct, to the point. Good read, Scarlett
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! ! ! So much meaning in so few, tantalising words! ! Uy, what a pleasant read! Warmest regards (and a score of 10, of course) from Ginal.