The Bleeding Soul On A Looking Glass Poem by Abhay Vignesh Liginlal

The Bleeding Soul On A Looking Glass

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Break, break and let me break myself
From this cycle of ages and night
Let me trade with the dust of eternal time
These sparks and hours of glory;

Break, break and let me break myself
From these chains of heart and reason
Let them melt in the fire of darkness and death
These dreams and sorrows of life;

Break, break and let me break myself
From the pain of life and death
Let me dip in the stream of salvation
The garb of life of this walking soul;

Break, break and let me break
These tools of mindless fancy
Let me trade with drops of wisdom
These words of verse for fame;

Break, break and let me break
From the clutches of anguish this red badge
Let me leave this blind pursuit of glory and fame
For one valiant death in a worthless war.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Rich in rhytym that is refreshing.

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Jenny Gordon 21 February 2011

Very fascinating, sober, and lofty. The images used are excellent in conveying the depth of the longing and struggle, ...concluding finally in glory out of a worthless war.....almost contradictory, yet so true. Excellent portrayal of living and the ultimate struggle.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 21 February 2011

Extremely beautiful poem having a lot of wisdom and depth. You have successfully and off course poetically proved your worth. The lines are sincere yet melodious. Great write.

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