The boy shook the tree
Apples flecked with russet dots
And strong hint of pink
Rained down plopping and bouncing
Into the gorgeous green grass.
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Loved the poem. It is a fine piece picturing the nature splendid with ripe apples and the natural instinct of children to bring them down. If it is the picture in America here in India we can see children shaking the branches of mango trees
You've described this even better than a painting, I can just close my eyes and drift off! .......... Many blessings! ..
How deeply and beautifully heart warming! .. Such beautiful sentiment and feel! .. Endless 5 Stars! .....+++++
Oh, This is so Awesome! .. Ever such beautiful imagery an feel! .. Again I feel understated, , , This is just so Wow! ..
This is just beautiful. Your explicit description of color makes look more jucier and attractive. I was taken back to the scene where this must be taking place.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A scene of innocence and beauty, painted to perfection.