The Buds In My Heart ~ ♥ Poem by M. Asim Nehal
The Buds In My Heart ~ ♥
The buds of my heart have blossomed into flowers,
Like the vapours evaporated and turned into clouds.
Whatever I conceived have become a poem,
Like the night with stars and moon.
All my wishes have turned into realities,
Like the rivers that flowed to the sea.
But the doubts of my heart remained as questions
Like a puzzled monkey with coconut.
Some of my poems are still waiting for its readers
Like the Crane standing on one leg at the sunset.....
I did not know that cranes are patient birds, how heartwarming is your fascinating poem beautifully built up and so humanly presented I admire this cutest cool and crystal clear composed creation, Asim Sir! A 10 Full score and much much more! Fantastically rendered.
From sunset to sunrise and from dream to reality we perceived many things and wonderful mind creates poetry beautifully. Many buds bloom into beautiful flowers. This poem is excellently penned with much beauty. An excellent poem is interestingly penned....10
DJ says this is a brilliant poem and deserves all accolade. 10/10
Outstanding couplets with each one better than the previous one. Thx
Very interesting poem. deals with multiple subects and Smiles.
A nice poem of similes with a concern for still unread poems of yours...lovely...they will be soon read and commented
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/2/2024 4:53:41 AM # 1.0.0.1119
The first 2 lines caught my attention so I clicked on more to read the entire poem and I am so glad I did. This poem exudes talent and I am definitely going to read more from you! Your images are unique, paint a picture, and I don't think I will forget that monkey or that crane anytime soon! 10