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Amy Ormonde
<font color= red>Nancy, France
Sunday, June 21, 2009

The Burdend Black Rose

Rating: 5.0
It's twisted I know
But true
I can only feel love when i'm dreaming it through
While this rose that burdens me
is lying on my chest
I watch as people stare at my lonliness
I sit up stunned as they walk past
Growing fear inside
The red rose wilts as the black rose blooms
Please come back
turn what was once red back again
Take awat this hate that stays,
As the black rose waits in silentness,
as I decay beneath it's beauty,
I need love but I can't feel it,
Won't except it,
I need to open up but the black rose holdsme still
love is what i'll never get,
I know it's twisted but true I can only feel love whrn i'm dreaming it through
The black rose burdens me
until I decay,
\then the black rose turns back to red
to reap me once again
another time left once more among the dead.
Amy Ormonde
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COMMENTS
Mel Atie 24 June 2009
i LOVE THIS POEM....THERE IS SOMETHING ABOUT MY PAST...THANK YOU FOR A SUCH LOVELY POEM...
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Kyle Jones 23 June 2009
I love how it reads, it is definitely well written, I'd give it a 8 or 9
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Eyan Desir 22 June 2009
10s Good write I like the flow but small errors needs to be fixed
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interesting thought. you are a good poet.
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Keith Hendrickson 21 June 2009
very good work. i really liked the way you ended it. keep up the great work
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Alex Andreev 21 June 2009
I THINK IT'S GOOD JOB. try to be well all the time, keep it on, get new poems and please: LIS MES VERS S'IL VOUS PLAÎT
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