! ! ! The Canopy Of Blue! ! ! Poem by Dr subhendu kar

! ! ! The Canopy Of Blue! ! !

Rating: 5.0


New morn bestows bliss by the sizzles of rain
the soul overwhelms by the oceanic blue
drizzling splashes the thirst of the sultry night
the mirth within bestirs into the thrust milling deep

the sun awakes sea from the stillness of slumber
sunset glows in deep scarlet red of shindig azure
twilight whispers the passion by the speckles of desire
the starry night bedecks the sky cradling the moon

colors of rainbow fluff up weaving the anchor
breath shimmies into the forest of green
aspiring the glimpse of grace on window of dream
cloud spreads its carpet over the shadow unfazed

the art of love precipitates over the canopy of lips
love of Lilly when intense by the gleams of moon
passion sparkles like eyes of the desire in the hide
swaggering the brims of delight by embrace of the blue

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarwar Chowdhury 08 August 2008

...amazing composition indeed a 10 has been clicked with joy!

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Anjali Mandokhot 06 August 2008

wonderful! ! have no words to describe......mindblowing imagery here.....'love of lily intensed by the gleams of the moon' you make blue look more beautiful... and every line seems to bea shade of blue the moon the lily, the sparkling passion your poems are treat to both eyes and mind keep writing wishes anjali

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Sandra Fowler 06 August 2008

The color blue has been inspiring the pen of poets time out of mind. You have succeeded in carrying on the tradiion in a most beautiful and eloquent way. Ten for this. Warm regards, Sandra

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Chitra - 02 August 2008

felt rejuvenated under this vast awning of blue

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Dorothy- A. Holmes 02 August 2008

Dr. Kar, I danced to the music and wonder of this poem...my heart sang! Dorothy 10!

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Raj Nandy 02 December 2009

The colors through their non-verbal modes of communication appeal directly to the human mind! Here the GREEN & BLUE shades calms the mind and rejuvinates the human spirit! 10! -Raj

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BEAU GOLDEN 28 October 2008

I am not easily impressed, and i am impressed.

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Sathyanarayana M V S 08 October 2008

Great descriptive poetry. Rarely we see such exquisite imagery........10

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O Anna Niemus 22 August 2008

hundreds of images are born by contemplating your beautiful word art

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Gloria Wekesa 15 August 2008

Great poem celebrating love and nature i love it.

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Dr subhendu kar

Dr subhendu kar

Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India
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