The Chanting Merman Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Chanting Merman

Rating: 5.0


I am a beautiful young princess,
With pretty pink lips painted with gloss,
Looking for the handsome prince,
He is a merman in the deep sea and the oceans.

He can swim as the whales and sharks,
And jump up and down as a dolphin’s fry,
He has the pure mind as the white,
Not tainted with any colored pigments,

Chanting my name all these years,
Wants to be human to walk on the streets,
To climb on the chariot to reach my palace,
His muscles are strong, not weakened by the weeds,

His thoughts are matured, thinking of our future,
Together, but he has crossed the oceans of illusion,
With the mighty butterfly stroke,
Chanting my name all these years,

The waves of gays and the girls are up,
My prince never bothers about their presence,
When he grows his own legs through penance,
He will come to my door step as the wind,
Holding the bouquets of fragrance in his hand,
We may roam the world with one single thought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 26 March 2014

a beautiful love poem. enjoyed reading

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 27 March 2014

High degree of hope that's the love when he grows the leg great hope lovely love poem with hope that to penance purity of love well compose in toto the poem is simple with hope and demands chastity holy love thanks

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 March 2014

He will come to my door step as the wind. Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Rajendran Muthiah 31 March 2014

The princess looks for the handsome merman with a spotless mind. He has crossed the oceans of illusion chanting her name. He will visit her as the fragrant breeze and then they roam the world with the single thought of love. The evolution of true love is excellent!

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 07 August 2014

Wow enchanting fantastic love poem of fantasy merman., symbolical. I admired yor creative butterfly stroke line.

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 20 April 2014

A beautiful poem of spiritual intimacy. I love it

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Unwritten Soul 14 April 2014

I just looking at my painting, a mermaid with black hair but now suddenly read ur chanting merman...i was LOLed at it hahahahaha..nice idea! ! _Soul

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

A beautiful fairy dream that's every girls secret wish.....so well put......a single thought is the main catalyst that makes the dream come true of two souls.......very nice

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Soulful Heart 09 April 2014

A beautiful fairy dream that's every girls secret wish.....so well put......a single thought is the main catalyst that makes the dream come true of two souls.......very nice

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