# The Chef- Haiku Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

# The Chef- Haiku

Rating: 4.9


the 'green' in the leaf
nourish the plant as a chef
the sun would provide

[thanks to carl harris]

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 04 June 2009

Very original thinking. You are a poet worthy of the name. Kind regards, Sandra

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Sandra Martyres 04 June 2009

Both educative and interesting...

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Joseph Poewhit 03 June 2009

Photosynthesis is like a heart beating.

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Shekhar Joshi 02 June 2009

biology and creativity mixed........hehe....

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Miriam Maia Padua 01 June 2009

very educational haiku.. the wonder of nature...the photosynthesis.. the wisdom of God in His creation... i love this... very vivid.... 10+++ l♥ velots, maia

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Shashendra Amalshan 09 June 2009

yes sir! ! ! ! ...you are a great cheff indeed..who give food for our thoughts.....nice write..10++ regards shan

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Indira Babbellapati 07 June 2009

a great n nourishin chef as well thought!

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Ken E Hall 06 June 2009

Yes the almighty will provide the sun we provide the chemicals thoughtful regards

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Sathyanarayana M V S 06 June 2009

Wow! What an idea. Truly poetic.

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Carl Harris 04 June 2009

This poem is still a senryu, samanyan, as any reference to man eliminates it from being a haiku poem. Your rephrasing of the original version is not quite what I suggested, but this new version makes the same point with the exception of the human term 'chef.' Carl.

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