the 'green' in the leaf
nourish the plant as a chef
the sun would provide
[thanks to carl harris]
very educational haiku.. the wonder of nature...the photosynthesis.. the wisdom of God in His creation... i love this... very vivid.... 10+++ l♥ velots, maia
yes sir! ! ! ! ...you are a great cheff indeed..who give food for our thoughts.....nice write..10++ regards shan
Yes the almighty will provide the sun we provide the chemicals thoughtful regards
This poem is still a senryu, samanyan, as any reference to man eliminates it from being a haiku poem. Your rephrasing of the original version is not quite what I suggested, but this new version makes the same point with the exception of the human term 'chef.' Carl.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very original thinking. You are a poet worthy of the name. Kind regards, Sandra