The Consciousness Poem by Soran M. H

The Consciousness

Rating: 5.0


Take off your wings—
there is no need
to fly toward those counterfeit worlds
or to witness
all those ghosts
hiding behind
colourful masks

The Consciousness
Tuesday, November 29, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: ghosts,wings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A poem of great depth. Very thought provoking. Our journey in life must always be for the Truth. Five brilliant lines crafted with wit and wisdom. To my favorites.

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Susan Williams 23 February 2023

I love the real depth beneath your words== if we do not explore the depths and heights and the mundane between, we might as well tear the wings off our intellect and our heart and soul------exceedingly high marks for this gem

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Bharati Nayak 18 January 2023

Very insightful poem....Take off the wings, no need - to fly to those fake worlds, and see all these ghosts

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