The Blue Sky Poem by Soran M. H

The Blue Sky

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The blue sky
Alcea and Foxgloves

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almost for a decade
Alcea and Foxgloves
are not gaining any height-
soon they left the gardens
Sun Excused them
for not having enough energy to give
meanwhile over the seas
its shining brightly
*
while sun alleges
saving the energy
for another generation!
The Alcea and Foxgloves
Sleeping rough
In a telephone cabins
On a corner of streets!
*
look like
there are a traffic jam
while crossing silently
and not vehicles moves,
perhaps
they wait for the sun
to recover!
or for the sky
to get clear

then life
get back into the normal moves
and solar vehicles too..

...
*Alcea: Hollyhock

March 2019

The Blue Sky
Saturday, May 30, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: political,suffering
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Soran M. H 31 May 2020

Dear poet Robert M Smith Thanks for your generous passage on my poem, your comment increases my eagerness to write and continue, really you are one of the good poet and critic who care about the poetry and honestly valuation it, all the best

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Soran M. H 31 May 2020

Thank you professor Yoonoos Peerbocus, poets always try to fix what corrupted by politicians and evil.. your generous comment is mean a lot to me..

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 June 2020

Almost for a decade! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Soran M. H 07 June 2020

Many Thanks dear poet Edward for your lovely comment, Have a nice time and wish you all the best

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Soran M. H 07 June 2020

YES UNFORTUNATELY A DECADE OR MORE, THANKS FOR READING MY HUMBLE PIECE OF WORK..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 October 2021

Thank you for this sad poem. I wept while reading it as it touched my soul Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 October 2021

A profound poem adorned with great images as always. Penetrating and discerning words that strike our mind and heart. Top Marks! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 October 2021

Another powerful poem that will wake up our senses and ponder what we must do to make a better tomorrow for all.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 October 2021

Mother Nature's generosity has its own limits. It has its own dangerous claws to make humanity suffer in one way or another.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 October 2021

Humanity and its political system have tremendously changed every corner of the Earth somewhat modified nature. Yet, the power of Mother Nature could never let humanity takes control. The adverse affects of humanity's abuses are showing in our daily life.

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