The wind over the dead leaves
rustles-
"A-l-l
i-zz zz-z
n-a-u-g-h-t"
The billows
howl-
"NONE
waits
for
NONE
So
izzZZzz
TIME"
The Old
bemoans-
"I
am
a-lone."
Reciting the saga of pain
that never dies
The sea of life
flows
on and on.............
None waits for none- - - - really neither time nor tide. Loved.
Great mystery and suspense, Valsa. You had me hanging on to my seat. Loved every moment of it!
“The billows howl-“ …… ………..”billows”? could my friend Valsa mean large waves on a lake or ocean? OR is it “willows”? OR ……….i HAVE heard of “pillow talk”! ! : ”pillows”? ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - “billows Plural form of billow, (bĭlˈō) ► • n. A large wave or swell of water. • n. A great swell, surge, or undulating mass, as of smoke or sound. • v. To surge or roll in billows.” - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This poem could depress some readers; not Bri of course. I like it. I like how she draws out some of the worrrrdzzz. bri :) p, s. noooowwww i see that i commented on this last year! well, no harm done; i enjoyed it again! bri :)
I love this innovative poem! The echoes of Nature are creatively captured and produce a tangible effect to the senses. Beautifully done!
(cont.) ha ha. i see both PH and i messed up/made mistakes, it seems, in that when i check my Postings i'm shown that i double-submitted some of my comments here, before THIS ONE! ! ok, OLD i can relate to! PH keeps me from being ALONE. PH includes VALSA GEORGE! Thanks, V.G. bri :)
(CONT.) BILLOWS? NOT Willows? ok, OLD i can relate to! PH keeps me from being ALONE. PH includes VALSA GEORGE! Thanks, V.G. bri :) p.s.! i commented two years ago! what a waste of my incredibly VALUABLE TIME today! ! (CONT.) BILLOWS? NOT Willows? ok, OLD i can relate to! PH keeps me from being ALONE. PH includes VALSA GEORGE! Thanks, V.G. bri :) ! i commented two years ago! what a waste of my incredibly VALUABLE TIME today! !
naught archaic pronoun: naught 1. nothing. he's naught but a worthless fool synonyms: nothing, nothing at all, no point, no purpose, no effect; More nil, zero; informal zilch, zip, nada, diddly-squat all his efforts will have been for naught noun North American 1. the digit 0; zero. I GUESS THERE IS naught LEFT TO SAY ON THAT SUBJECT! (CONT.) '
Reciting the saga of pain provokes thought. This poem talks about blowing of wind on dry leaves and we feel that again greenness will reappear. This poem is very brilliant and amazing poem definitely...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The wind rustling - naught, the billows howling - time, the old bemoaning - alone- -The sea of life / flows / on and on! Simply Admirable! !