The Curse That Has Changed My Life Comments

I love the honesty in this poem, it's funny how reflection after the fact gives us a clarity we weren't able to see at the time. Nice writing and smooth phrasing. Loved it. I also invite you to browse through my posted poems.

This poem tells that true love is real and always stay long. the poetry lines are well said. I love it.

A very nice piece of work for us to learn from you as well. Thanks for sharing it with us. E.K.L.

Can't wait for the next installment. What did that hurt girl do to you?

contains all a romantic poem does. intense love, loss, pain sorrow yearning for what is lost. fabulous write!

I didn't want to break your heart So I broke mine That was a foolish thing to do Since we were fine Very realistic bent of mind.Poetrys realisation start with this natural orginal sin of understanding oneself in the ways variant.Well done

Very romantic. May you are in a haste to make another choice. Many do not know that 'love is lke a river that flows. Good poem.

Lovely... nice wordplay...

Nice work :) happy writing. Happy reading.

That is such a great poem! It is so well written and I loved it!

Your poem tells a story with such stark honesty, i really enjoyed it.