The Dance Poem by Melvina Germain

The Dance

Rating: 4.7


Andre fell in love with her beauty,
her royal elegant appearance.
She carried herself proud, purring
like a kitten, never boisterous or loud.

Stroking her perfect body, touching
her curves oh so gently.
He felt like the king of the ball, stood
handsome and so very tall.

Together they made their royal entrance,
totally captivating the audience.
Proud as can be,
they danced- for all to see.

Screams of elation filled the crowd,
while this royal couple took their bows.
A dance performed with perfection,
no need for criticism or direction.

An applaud broke out, a standing ovation.
Smiles laughter an awesome celebration.
The competition ended in glory,
now on with that fairy tale story.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 12 May 2007

Your the bell of the ball, and your story kept me Enthralled... Melvina 10

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Yes this truly is a fairy tale...it has all the makings of one! If only it could always stay that way...((Smile)) Your descriptions and ideas were so well written in this mystical piece. I love how the imagery carried me along from beginning to enddddddddddd! A Great well written write........... =Shelley=

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Lorena Walker 15 May 2007

very descriptive and beautiful!

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Scarlett Treat 12 May 2007

And, I just know, they lived happily everafter? Wonderful fairy tale beginning....more, more!

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Esther Leclerc 12 May 2007

Melvina, wonderful description and enticing hints of more to come... Esther : ]

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David Harris 12 May 2007

Melvina, the lovely creation of a royal ball just sweeps us off our feet with the underling romance with in it. Impeccably written as always. A real joy to read as soon as you come online. Top Marks from me. Thanks for sharing. David

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Melvina Germain

Melvina Germain

Sydney, Nova Scotia
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