The Dancer Poem by Aqua Flower

The Dancer

Rating: 5.0


She was a dancer
the music and movement fed her soul
she danced through life
and every strife
she move with every season
till she woke up one morning
and couldn't move her feet
she couldn't hear the music
she was paralyzed with defeat
she can only dance now in her mind
longing for her life to rewind

Copyright @ Aqua Flower

Thursday, May 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: art,dance,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Laya Bajpai 20 August 2018

I have tears in my eyes as I read this poem...

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Carl Roussell 24 May 2018

Getting your mind to an earlier happier time can be such a challenge. A 10.

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Aqua Flower 24 May 2018

Thank you for the nice rating! I was a dancer so this was easy to compose! Dancing is another form of artistic expression that I used to like more than poetry. But since my body doesn't move as well, I though poetry may be a little easier!

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Robert Murray Smith 24 May 2018

A poignant write but there is hope.++10

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Aqua Flower 24 May 2018

I always liked the word poignant! it sounds so sophisticated. Thank you, Robert, as always, for reading my poetry and ffor your nice comments!

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