The Day Dawns.... Poem by Nosheen Irfan

The Day Dawns....

Rating: 5.0


- -The day dawns with a mirthful song
A blushing sun appears to charm- -
- -White clouds sail with ease
To destinations unseen- -
- -Wet leaves shake themselves dry
Green grasses are so mild- -
- -Trees feel gay to their roots
Falling in love with the breeze- -
- -Listen, my love, to what they say
For they speak on my behalf today- -


Nosheen Irfan © 2016
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Friday, June 10, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,hope,love,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Sharma Rimi 10 June 2016

Falling in love with the breeze- - - -Listen, my love, to what they say For they speak on my behalf today- - Beautiful poem. Enjoyed reading it.

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Daniel Brick 24 June 2016

This poem is a gift, as we learn in the last two lines, but the whole poems speaks of the Earth and her natural components as gifts to our sense of wonder. You create a whole world of giving and spread these gifts outward in a calm, tender voice. Poetry was made to do this. (I.m not denying some poems are abrasive, even ugly because they are attacking societal issues, and that is a summons a poet cannot ignore. I realize that. But we need poems also that cast a steady light over the goodness of the world and the goodness of humans.)

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Kelly Kurt 12 June 2016

For they speak on my behalf today- - An absolutely beautiful poem, Nosheen. A 10+

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M Asim Nehal 11 June 2016

A call by morning to start a new day afresh. The day dawns with a mirthful song A blushing sun appears to charm-..........Awesome 10+++

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Last two lines are very beautiful.10

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Barry Middleton 10 June 2016

Delightful start for a new day. The poem's images are perfect.10

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Lahore, Pakistan
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