The Death Of A Humane Society Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

The Death Of A Humane Society



It was a morning like any other.
A cloud from the South, a sparrow
sitting on the windowsill, eating,
the Postman, ringing twice next door,
a streetcar of desire screeching to a halt,
and the traffic cop attending to impatience,
and, at rush hour, his recurring boxershort creep.

Across the street the baker was yawning again,
that Yugoslavian woman dumping soapy water
out the window onto the busy sidewalk,
and the paperboy, aged seventy plus, hoarsely,
proclaiming that Nixon was the man to be watched.

From across the barely polluted river of Babylon
came a breeze of air, no not fresh air as such,
it brought with it an invisible cloud of doom,
which settled, like the sticky sugar coating,
applied to a jelly-filled donut, onto the city,
the country, and it swept the world from there,
its humble beginnings notwithstanding.

'Nonobstant' mumbled Monsieur Cazin,
French travel agent, occupying a round kiosk,
no one knew of course what exactly it meant,
and even the French teacher from the school,
he just scratched his head. But he also suspected,
it was more a gut feeling though, that something,
something awfully big was taking place, merde,
it seemed to fit, intuitively, and then, without warning,
time stood still, the earth stopped its rotation,
people's hearts stopped and not a breath was heard.

And when it all started up again, for reasons unknown,
the world as it was known had ceased to exist.
It was the day that claimed the word humane,
with all its meaning and substance, its noblesse.
The death of Humane Medicine was a twin of many
to the tragic loss of all that made us human beings,
not just people, but homo sapiens par excellence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 September 2005

A 'tad' too abstract for me although an enjoyable read...it took me several times!

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Allan James Saywell 02 September 2005

i understand herbert it is the main reason i am thinking of going to live in a tree again maybe there might be a new animal i can meet who understands me the kind loving human beings i used to know have all moved on or died the ones that are left are all prededators, mentally unbalenced or just plain mean good write my friend up there with your best Warm regards AJS

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Sara Watson-Roy 02 September 2005

confused and awkward in spots- pretty good for you.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 02 September 2005

That describes you if one wants to be nice. Why don't you visit the Eiffel Tower. It's a beautiful view.

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Mary Nagy 02 September 2005

I thought it was a very good poem. You paint such a tense and foreboding mood...very good. Sincerely, Mary

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Herbert Nehrlich1 03 September 2005

Thank you all, it is very much appreciated. And you are right Michael. And it is a crying shame. H

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Michael Shepherd 03 September 2005

For me, this impressive piece has its total impact three lines from the end. No need to point the moral! Congratulations and thanks.

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Theorem Thetruthserum 02 September 2005

Very good don't listen to Sarah Watson-Roy...even when she puts in a compliment it is with a negative overture. This was an awesome poem...loved it for all that it is and all that it says.

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Kelly Allen Vinal 02 September 2005

AMongst the best of your serious work, H. Simply wonderful.

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 02 September 2005

Very moody, powerful, and thought provoking.....One of your best.

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