The Dialogue Poem by Sylvia Frances Chan

The Dialogue

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The Dialogue

come on sun,
go up, show up with your wide mouth
or would you rather stay on the ground?
then I can't see you right away

then it will remain gray all-day
kitty meow doesn't come anytime soon either
you know I mean Luna
she can help me with my charity

she knows exactly what I mean
though we swim in different seas
but always with the same wavelength

yes yes, she is not our cat
but she makes the big hole close to us
automatically being solved

come on sun,
go up, show up with your wide mouth
or would you rather stay on the ground?
then I can't see you right away

©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
November 14,2023

The Dialogue
Tuesday, November 14, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: november,cat,sun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Almost all days rainy and grey clouds, sometimes code yellow and red, but almost all days of the week, gray/grey weather. Thank you for reading, best regards, Sylvia Frances Chan, The Netherlands
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nosheen Irfan 21 November 2023

Sylvia in my country we usually crave the rain as we get too much of the sun. But I can understand the importance of the sun. It's so soothing in winters. Beautifully penned!

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 14 November 2023

Heart-warming pets will certainly make our day sunny. Nice poem. Nicely conceived

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 November 2023

Thank you for your precious visit to my poem site. Indeed, you are absolutely right, heart-warming pets will certainly make our day sunny, thank you for your brilliant response

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Koffi B Sossou 14 November 2023

This is a well written poem.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 November 2023

Thank you Koffi, thank you somuch for your response.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 November 2023

An interesting and well crafted and expressed poem as always, my friend. Top Marks. Glad you mentioned, Luna, the cat. Loved your poems for this beautiful cat.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 November 2023

Thank you for the Top Marks, dear great poetess, only the editor shows she knows better, yes, the editor is a woman.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 14 November 2023

This beautiful poem resonates with me, my friend. For the past few days, the sun has been totally covered with dark clouds. Cloudy, rainy and shorter days affect our mood. And just like you, I always wish the sun will show up to brighten our days and be more energetic.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 18 November 2023

My dear friend, I am grateful in all my being for your great response. So very happy to read your lovely response, I always enjoy your comments on my poems, thank YOU, my dear friend

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