The Dialogue
come on sun,
go up, show up with your wide mouth
or would you rather stay on the ground?
then I can't see you right away
then it will remain gray all-day
kitty meow doesn't come anytime soon either
you know I mean Luna
she can help me with my charity
she knows exactly what I mean
though we swim in different seas
but always with the same wavelength
yes yes, she is not our cat
but she makes the big hole close to us
automatically being solved
come on sun,
go up, show up with your wide mouth
or would you rather stay on the ground?
then I can't see you right away
©Sylvia Frances Chan - All Rights Reserved
November 14,2023
Heart-warming pets will certainly make our day sunny. Nice poem. Nicely conceived
Thank you for your precious visit to my poem site. Indeed, you are absolutely right, heart-warming pets will certainly make our day sunny, thank you for your brilliant response
An interesting and well crafted and expressed poem as always, my friend. Top Marks. Glad you mentioned, Luna, the cat. Loved your poems for this beautiful cat.
Thank you for the Top Marks, dear great poetess, only the editor shows she knows better, yes, the editor is a woman.
This beautiful poem resonates with me, my friend. For the past few days, the sun has been totally covered with dark clouds. Cloudy, rainy and shorter days affect our mood. And just like you, I always wish the sun will show up to brighten our days and be more energetic.
My dear friend, I am grateful in all my being for your great response. So very happy to read your lovely response, I always enjoy your comments on my poems, thank YOU, my dear friend
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sylvia in my country we usually crave the rain as we get too much of the sun. But I can understand the importance of the sun. It's so soothing in winters. Beautifully penned!