The Disappearance Poem by Dee Daffodil

The Disappearance

Rating: 5.0


My friend
Has disappeared
And I feel
Such sorrow
In my heart
Not knowing
Where
Or when
Or Why...
By Dee Daffodil;

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tailor Bell 14 August 2006

deep feelings. well paced and structured evenly. superb. -Tailor

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Brian Dorn 14 August 2006

Dee, I like the profound nature of this. I think we've all experienced this with friendships... the hardest part is not knowing why. Good write! Brian

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Chuck Audette 09 August 2006

Someone here on PH? Alas, the internet is good for making connections, but not always good for keeping them... - chuck

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Duncan Wyllie 07 August 2006

I hope that things will come to light Love duncan X

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Diane Violet 06 August 2006

Dee, I hope you find your friend! Take care.

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