She is the wild, intimate wind rushing across the land,
Like her instinct for impulsive love,
She blends in with the rain sodden clouds above,
Her hair sparkling with the jewels of
raindrops
Clinging onto her golden brown strands,
Her faith is in the soil and the growing crops,
Her truth is the birds in flight
And foxes prowling on star filled nights
She is part of nature's law,
With her acceptance of making mistakes but she puts them right,
Love for her land soaks deeply into her green oasis eyes,
The land is God's plan,
To reach out to fragile crops of the soul,
She never run's away
From her earthly ways,
As the moon, sun and stars
Are friends never too far
Reaching out to ripen orchard apples,
crops and souls
To ripen her emotional complexities
And to bloom under her friend the
shattered sun
Peeping from rain sodden clouds sharing
unpredictable fun,
Her life is her impulsive heart and soul
beating with nature
And the shimmering sun,
She looks across her land and love sit's
on its mighty throne,
The earth is her kingdom and her beloved one.
This is a beautiful poem on Land, wind and love having fantastic expression with nice diction. Every line is so touching. I want to cite here some lines..... To ripen her emotional complexities And to bloom under her friend the shattered sun Peeping from rain sodden clouds sharing unpredictable fun, ....... The earth is her kingdom and her number one. Thank you dear madam for sharing this gem with us.10
One who is at peace with Nature can derive a lot of joy! Nature rarely disappoints us! I enjoyed the flight of fancy and the choice of words in this beautifully crafted poem! A 10
Her life is her impulsive heart and soul. What a line! Nicely crafted poem.I loved to read. Binaya.
Magnificent poem! ! This poem struck a place in my heart...I am at peace with the soil and all of its wants, crops, , hair sparkles with jewels of raindrops, I love the smell of fresh plowed soil and I love the earthy flow of this poem! ! ! Mistakes are put right...nature does indeed help in this..great poem..on my favorites! !
The poem earns full marks from me,5 stars! I also recommend this poem to be chosen as a 'Member Poem of the Day'!
What a beautiful poem on nature, every stanza has something to offer! I am so impressed, and felt obsessed, With the poetic rhapsodies and the sweet melodies Of this poem, a real gem, That I chose to address, and bless This poem with these lines of mine, with a bit of rhyme! Congratulations Hazel, for a poem so very well written!
melodious poem. wonderful imagery. nature love. all is lovely.
very nice ma'am long time no c on pages of me so no glee for me but ur poetry is lovely
This poem could have been written in the 18th century! It has that romantic, pastoral, and rhapsodic notes of humans in harmony with the Nature: it is jocund, free-spirited, bucolic and bohemian; it dances on the rhythm of its own: it is free as the heroine of it!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wonderful and crafty poem,10 I quote: Her life is her impulsive heart and soul beating with nature And the shimmering sun, She looks across her land and love sit's on its throne