Bravely, but awkwardly
He opens the front door
To bistro and her heart
Smiles galore abound...
I'm smiling as I'm reading your response, Unni! Very happy that you love it! THX so very much!
I think this verse represents a milestone in your work. You have taken a most ordinary event, perhaps a chance meeting, and elevated it to what undoubtedly becomes a life changing, an awakening, moment for any couple reading this verse!
2) A world of THX to you, my friend for elevating me to Cloud Nine! ! !
That's quite a HUGE compliment, M.J.! You've elevated me to Cloud Nine. It's so beautiful up here looking down at this milestone. I'll have to write some more milestones!
A perfect poem deserves a perfect ending. I really enjoyed reading your poem and stepping up to the plate with a happy ending. THX for the challenge and inspiration, D.N.!
So beautifully composed! .. Endless 10'S And Stars! ..++++++++++++++++++++
To the moon and back. A world of THX, becca for the infinite 10's and stars!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Many THX, Kevin Patrick for having added this poem to your favourites!