She is lying hidden
Inside a pear-shaped shell
A rough, rock-hard outside
So porcelain white inside
A safe haven
For a delicate life.
Out of the blue
In the Pacific Ocean
So blue
Someone forced its way
In the oyster's sheltered territory
The invader
Is like a splinter
It pricked her plump body
That is so soft
And slimy.
Yet, the invader
Was never ejected by the oyster
Instead it was coated
And treated
With warmness
And kindness.
The kind gesture
Turned into an exquisite treasure
A gem so marvelous
A pearl so precious.
Copyright 2017, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
It's a precious piece of work! The beauty of this poem lies in the first stanza! All lines are meaningful! ....The underlying philosophy of your poem is just immaculate Rose, thanks for sharing....10
Thank you Dr. Dillip for the wonderful comment. Your visit is much appreciated.
The lines are as extraordinary as the extraordinary kindness.My reverence to u Mam.
This is an amazing work....... profound indeed.....thank u.....
The kind gesture Turned into an exquisite treasure A gem so marvelous A pearl so precious........An exquisite poem that i can read again and again. Happy New Year Rose. With warmest good wishes and regards.
This is an outstanding piece.....enjoyed it....thank u dear poetess....
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
FOUR: A briliant poem, you started with her, refined and constantly built up to the height of beauty, an enchanting appearance, the poem is wonderfully worded. Hats off for you, while I make a deep bow, Mrs. Juan-Austen, you are as a poetess like the angel in paradise, so sweet and so wise, I have respect for the long journey that have made my pearls, and for the poet who created the possibility for it. Grandest worded, sublimest