The Fate Of Love Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

The Fate Of Love

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The sky is limitless dome,
All the planets are jewells,
The night looks pretty home,
There is beauty where love dwells,
But, eagle always hunts the dove,
The beauty is free but not love.


God's made men but not caste,
They've themselves erected walls,
In the courtyard of human, that would be vast,
So, poor love strives flying but falls,
The society's made among us destinition,
The caste is the obstacle in love's destination.


I know not what the pain,
Or what to say that I feel,
All my efforts may go in vain,
If my compulsion doesn't let me reveal,
My love and intention to the mother of hers,
In her separation, I only compose my song verse.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 18 April 2012

A really great poem, like it, a great write.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 04 April 2012

Nicely written, Muzzammil. You have assessed the situation very well. Great poem. Loved it.

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Ata Ata 04 April 2012

It is nicely written.Personally, I believe that love hasn't walls, barriers, castes and so on.Love is free and heart can feel what it wishes itself.Sometimes the heart will never get this right answer, however still it is worth to feel.

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