Muslim Poem by Mohammad Muzzammil

Muslim

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Those who are muslims just for name,
They really Islam defame,
No future they have nor any aim,
Like a candle without flame.

A true muslim is beneficial like a tree,
Who is blessing and symbolizes peace,
Invites to worship only one God, be free,
To believe not only words but deeds.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Luke Easter 15 December 2010

James 1: 22, 'don't just be hearers of the word but doers of the word'

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Amy Marie 16 December 2010

Nice rhyme scheme :)

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Leela Devi 24 December 2010

full of realism all through/ keep writing

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Lee Mack 24 December 2010

Thanks for poems One of many worlds born empty of all men (Mankind) must have had one or many poems each of these poems must have more love than all men put together... right - writes

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Faith Ali 17 January 2011

full of right meanings.. yeah, that's what all should know cause not anyone called Muslim is Muslim, and Islam not just a word.. keeeeep writing......

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Mahtab Bangalee 07 October 2019

MUSLIM to me TOTAL SURRENDERED HUMAN BEING TO THE ULTIMATE ALMIGHTY!

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Spiritual Seeker 02 July 2011

You have said it very well...a very strong and true message.

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Hans Vr 01 July 2011

This is very well written. A thorough wisdom, poetically expressed.

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Shadow Girl 29 June 2011

You have a talent for gettin across an important meaning in few words. They say a picture paints a thousand words....i think your words paint a thousand pictures in the minds of many.....well done....keep writing. SG

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Whispering Rose 14 June 2011

very true, i hope we're more like the real Muslims or at least try to be

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