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The Forgotten Grated Cheese

Poem by poem hater

The once solid block,
full of flavour,
overwhelming the senses.
Turned into a nub that has been battered
by waves of temptation,
and become a forgotten masterpiece
laying in its large white coffin
awaiting its death.
The grater scrapes slowly
with the sharp blades thrashing its skin
and being picked prodded and probed.
Shrinking into nothing,
diminshing into oblivion
but fulfilling its purpose.


Comments about The Forgotten Grated Cheese by poem hater

  • John Dohoney (11/17/2008 8:30:00 AM)

    Ive never seen some one write so much about cheese
    or someone who writes about their poo
    you do it well(Report)Reply

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  • Kyle Shield Laster (7/21/2008 3:01:00 PM)

    very dramatic...(Report)Reply

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  • Greenwolfe 1962 (6/9/2008 11:48:00 AM)

    This description of cheese brought tears to my eyes.

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  • Philip Housiaux (4/14/2008 12:56:00 PM)

    a new observation to write on good work thanks(Report)Reply

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  • Wandering ScarletWandering Scarlet (8/3/2007 10:22:00 PM)

    spare me.....(Report)Reply

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  • Michael Witkowski (7/8/2005 7:56:00 AM)

    Awwww i cry my eyes out-- poor cheese. hope this pem isn't based on reality: (
    Hope you didn't treat it in such a cruel way: (Good poem(Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 25, 2005