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You Come To Me Quiet As Rain Not Yet Fallen

Rating: 3.6

You come to me quiet as rain not yet fallen
Afraid of how you might fail yourself your
dress seven summers old is kept open
in memory of sex, smells warm, of boys,
and of the once long grass.
But we are colder now; we have not
Love’s first magic here. You come to me
Quiet as bulbs not yet broken
Out into sunlight.

The fear I see in your now lining face
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Steven Brown 25 August 2020

Poem made me really think about myself

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Sarah Shahzad 02 February 2020

such a beautiful work here..! ! i really love this.. thanks for sharing keep writing :)

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Budhashaya Behera 02 February 2020

Looking across the year we can look upon life. This poem is very interesting one.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 February 2020

You Come To Me Quiet As Rain Not Yet Fallen...you come to me quiet as the last of our senses closing/// Romantically written; lovely expression

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Rich Tassinari 02 February 2020

Attraction certainly changes with age. And, in this poem, letting go of those younger, passionate attractions means (although puzzling when compared to what was) a sense of quiet and silence, perhaps acceptance.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 February 2020

Rain yet has not fallen and rain yet has not whispered. In lining of face fear is seen. Beauty of life is felt with beauty of love. This poem is very interestingly penned and this is an nice poem of the day. Thank you very much for sharing this....10

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 February 2020

quiet as rain not fallen. wonderful expressions. tony

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Edward Kofi Louis 02 February 2020

Love's magic steps! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Adeeb Alfateh 30 May 2019

beautiful 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Adeeb Alfateh 30 May 2019

come to me you can come to me as the tranquil rain drop...........

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