The Gentle Soul Poem by Varsha M

The Gentle Soul

Rating: 5.0


Mother so simple
Live in my inside
With memories
Of love and care
Woven with her unseen labor.
Ever since she conceived me
She loved me as her own
Mother so dear
Never left me alone
Whenever I needed her presence.
Ever since I look home
She comes in my dream
Smiling like an angel
Taking away all my pain
Giving me rest I always own.
World would have been a mess
Had I not been her own flesh
Patiently guiding me
Teaching me all that is best
Strengthening me to stand on my own feet.
Nothing as wonderful as your love
Oh mother! My mother angel prime
You are my lost hope
Everytime I find myself in dust
Struggling to make a hut.

The Gentle Soul
Friday, May 15, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,mother,motherhood
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by the poem Mothers smile by me poet yeps poet really touchy poem. I began the starting lines as his comments but them made it into a complete poem.
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 May 2020

A very compassionate and well written tribute to a great mum. Lovely and very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.

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Varsha M 19 May 2020

Thank-you you sir for your precious time to read my work.

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Mohabeer Beeharry 15 May 2020

This is a lovely write about mother. Mothers are the great creations Of God, whoever love and understand them is blessed. Mohabeer Beeharry

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 May 2020

A very touching poem. Well penned and conveyed...10++

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Dipak Adhya 28 July 2020

Like the previous poem " father" read by me, this one is also unique.... You are blessed daughter indeed....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 June 2020

World would have been a mess/Had I not been her own flesh/Patiently guiding me/Teaching me all that is best...not only an endearing peace of poetry but also a great tribute to your beloved mother.....Top score.

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Bharati Nayak 13 June 2020

Nothing as wonderful as your love Oh mother! My mother angel prime You are my lost hope Everytime I find myself in dust Struggling to make a hut. - - - - - A marvelous poem on mother's love.Thanks for sharing.

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Vidya Murali 29 May 2020

Thank you varsha for reading many of my poems. Read my poem The Magnificent Woman if time permits

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Vidya Murali 29 May 2020

Wow.... Varsha... really the comments inspire us to do more and in extraordinary way. You have inspired me many days. Thanks for sharing

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Varsha M 29 May 2020

I am obliged to with your honour. We all help in one way or the other. Thank-you ma'am.

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