The Girl Poem by Tracey Owens

The Girl

Rating: 3.5


She knows everyones troubles
and worries in the world.
She carries this burden of
knowledge everywhere she goes.
She carries the weight of
this burden on her shoulders.
There is no one that can
balance this burden with her.
She is the girl with a burden.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

this is good.. um, trace, who is this girl? ? ? ? ?

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rago rago 06 June 2009

just the girl with full of burdens.........relieve her let she enjoy the life....... yu have penned beautifully..........

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James Mclain 06 June 2009

You burden is shared, this you know as well, you have a grace about your words that make them pure...iip

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Linda Weischedel 06 June 2009

Nice twist at the end.

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