The Heart Of A Lifetime Poem by Aden Orie
The Heart Of A Lifetime
Everyone has a heart
they give us life
they beat in our chests
and are as strong as a knife
can be as weak as a feather
or can soar like a bird
all blood flow can be heard
it can be felt
death will dawn on us
its what were dealt
but no more worries
no more pain
all blood flow stops
not a flowing vein
but life starts again
another beating heart
without all the pain
the cycles of life
but no heart is the same
dear friend your poems are good i prefer the darker side but i still think your a good poet keep it up
I am a heart patient. Your poem is touching to know. Yes, no heart is the same!
Aden I really relate to this poem as I'm imminently facing open-heart thoracic surgery...
our physical hearts are not the same but the same our souls remain as they incarnate again to pass new tests until all tests are passed
Commentary on the heart. Good way to use your observations to write a good poem. But I agrre with Jenny Sar, I like the Ones better
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 8:36:18 AM # 1.0.0
you 've the heart to write a good piece. keep it up aden.