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Tuesday, April 7, 2015

The Immoral Days

Rating: 4.8
In guilt, I recall my immoral days,
The days spent in insensible ways.
Down into the bottom of hell,
My thoughts did fell.
My soul didn't cry,
Nor eyes felt shy.
How was the immoral blow,
The mind full of evil flow.
In praise to self, I did exalt,
Denying my every single fault.
To save self name and fame,
To others, I did blame.
I was the enemy of my soul,
Avoided it to reach its goal.
To self I called, a perfect,
But, was full of defect.
The immoral days had such a ride,
Where I refused to abide.
Those were the early days of ignorance,
Such days shall never return, I give assurance.
Abdulrazak Aralimatti
Topic(s) of this poem: mystical
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COMMENTS
Kevin Patrick 02 June 2020
An honest and revealing examination of oneself, we all in our younger years are not the human beings we could be, but that's why we have room to grow and evolve. Wonderful poem, I am happy to have read this work.
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Aniruddha Pathak 09 April 2019
Those were the early days of ignorance, Such days shall never return, I give assurance... Many of us can easily connect to such a situation. Well-penned.
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Chinedu Dike 31 January 2017
Beautiful piece of poetry, well articulated and elegantly penned in good rhyme scheme with spiritual awareness. Thanks for sharing.
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Recognizing, rectifying and confessing, thanks a lot sir
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Loke Kok Yee 13 October 2015
Every body goes through this stage in life, some more intense some less some survive and became better a few stayed in there all their lives. Thanks-10
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Dr Antony Theodore 09 September 2015
My soul didn't cry, Nor eyes felt shy. How was the immoral blow, The mind full of evil flow. My dear Poet, you have wonderfully portrayed how Pride can lead us astray. Self-willed we go our way and fall. It is a wonderful experience to realize the faults and come back to God. You have portrayed it very well dear Poet. Thank you for this poem.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2015
So nicely penned on both remorse and hope. Beautifull poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.....10
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Jak Black 26 July 2015
A well written, interesting piece. We all make mistakes in life but to recognise and take responsibility for our weaknesses, and to act upon them is truly a virtue.
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Anil Kumar Panda 17 July 2015
Assurance that you won't repeat the mistake is like repentance. Beautiful ink.
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Seema Chowdhury 16 July 2015
well composed and an engaging write. thanks
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