The Immortal Line Poem by ANJANDEV ROY

The Immortal Line

Rating: 5.0


There....there....
The immortal line....
In the farthest corner,
I stare at it in amazement,
It too gazes at me in astonishment,
Long time elapses,
Eventually we become deeply entwined with each other.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 09 January 2022

An excellent poem dear Anjandev! Proceed in this honest way. Keep writing! !

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 January 2022

Good poetry is immortal. And, "A thing of beauty is a joy for ever! "

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 09 January 2022

The immortal line entwined with each other. A marvellous poem of super image.......10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 08 January 2022

An interesting imaginative poem. Thought provoking.

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David Wood 08 January 2022

Is it a duality or repetition? There, there.

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