The Incomplete Love Story Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Incomplete Love Story

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The waters of the love river were too deep
I was ignorant its banks were so much steep
A few pages of my story are yet to be written
To complete it come back in my arms and sleep
I was silent, yet pains could not remain in hide
My eyes relayed my heart beats and painful beep
Come and listen to what happened in loneliness
Youth I passed in tears though I could not weep
My beloved's anger has love in its depths
I see love, through the unkind eyes when I peep
Once I saw your old black and white portrait
I found you in my arms with your naughty creep
I found you laughing on your pains and defeats
Oh Arzoo! In your frustrations you never weep.

This is a translation of the poem Aaja Keh Adhoori Hai Mohabbat Ki Kahani! by Aarzoo Mehek
Monday, June 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
آجا کہہ ادھوری ہے محبت کی کہانی! - آرزو مہک

گہرا تھا بہت عشق كے دریاؤں کا پانی
میں ڈوب گئی پانی میں نادان دیوانی

کچھ صفحے ابھی لکھنے کو باقی ہیں میرے دوست
آجا کہہ ادھوری ہے محبت کی کہانی

میں چُپ تھی مگر چھپ نہ سکا دَرْد غم دِل
آنكھوں نے بتا دی ہے میرے دِل کی کہانی

آ جا کہہ سناؤں تجھے تنہائی كے قصے
رَو رَو كے صدا میں نے گزاری ہے جوانی

اس شخص كے غصے میں محبت بھی چھپی ہے
ہے بے رحمیی یار محبت کی نشانی

لگتا تھا مجھے تو میرے پہلو میں کہیں ہے
اک بار جو دیکھی تیری تصویر پرانی

ہنس ہنس كے اٹھایا ہے سدا بوجھ غموں کا
ااے آرزو اِس دِل نے کبھی ہر نہ مانی
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 June 2018

A beautiful poem magnificently crafted. Very touching. A brilliant translation.10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 June 2018

please send my congrats for hie love devotion now a days it seldom happens may say tooee naheen toe kuch baath naheen tooe naheeen towe koi aur sahee

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

A fine translation has been made by you dear Jawadji. Let me quote two lines from your translated poem.... A few pages of my story are yet to be written To complete it come back in my arms and sleep A beautiful love poem by Aarzoo Mehek. Thank you for sharing here.

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Thats the beautiful poem, thought I couldn't read its translation.

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Rini Shibu 18 June 2018

The story which is yet to be completed, waiting for the loved ones inspiration..Beautiful

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