The Journey - 01 Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra
The Journey - 01
It was a journey
Much awaited,
Much Needed,
Yet turbulent,
The journey from the womb.
My day started
With a separation-
By a razor blade
Bisecting the cord,
That joined me
With a great woman
CalledMother.
Everyone else
Was rejoicing
But I was
Shocked with the change, frightening
Stunned with the brightness, blinding
Estranged by the huge noise, disturbing
A fish out of water
As I was...
Feeling
Breathless-
Started to inhale
A vapour world,
Restless-
No bed to stead on,
Started to wave my limbs
My first walk
In the air
Withoutanydestination.
They splashed
Water on me-
I felt hot.
They rubbed me with cotton-
I felt lonely.
At last I tried
To communicate
Toexpressmyfeelings.
It was -
Only a cry.
They splashed Water on me- I felt hot. They rubbed me with cotton- I felt lonely. At last I tried To communicate To express my feelings. It was - Only a cry. Nicely described the birth of a new life, a real journey. Thanks for sharing it.
What a beautiful poem..10. By the way, , hank you Subhas for your comment on my poem, An Extraordinary Potter.
What a beautiful drop! ! The commencement of a great journey called life. One is yet unknown to the world of many surprises one has to go through and simply takes a first stride in the air to feel light and free. Great ink.10++++
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They rubbed me with cotton- I felt lonely. At last I tried To communicate To express my feelings. It was - Only a cry. Wow, beautiful description of the birth of a divine child. Thanks for it.10++ for the nice poem. Seema
Thank you Rini dear for such inspiring words.