I will write some poetry, to heal my broken heart,
Just to release my feelings.To give me a new start.
A start for a new day, cause we don't know what is in store,
A start to realise that any key can open that much needed door.
It's just finding that key and believing there is a way,
Today may be lousy yet tomorrow is a new day.
Hope is often your only answer and that is all that you can do
Hope and believe and be proud of just who,
Who you are, what you are and just what you can achieve,
Just what you can give...If only you believe.
Copyright Reserved May 2014
LYN PAUL
Great poem Lyn, hope is something we should all try to hold on to - very wise and inspired write.
Nice one. Yes, we pass our emotion into our write to let it free for all.
Today may be lousy yet tomorrow is a new day. Hope is often your only answer and that is all that you can do... Yes, whatever dark the night is, it must be vanished and morning must come. Nicely and aptly envisioned. Enjoyed. Many thanks.
Condensed wisdom and a capsule of hope. Yes the Sun will shine tomorrow! !
A lot of positive thoughts, is there some deeper sadness behind this piece?
(The sun will come out tomorrow) ...this sentence is as emphatic as Hemingway's (The sun also rises) ...How focused and resolute the poet's mind is...as if she is sure how medicinal, how healing poetry can prove itself..the style of composition looks like recursive...one key idea runs the next line, that keeps the reader going alongwith the thought running! ! ! it's my first from this page and v.good! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
We are riding to the same destination, our life just have different route then...so the challenges that we may meet...and no life seems so perfect as no road is having great without a depression base...i hope for you, myself and everybody to hold on, let be strong and wish us to be better day by day...Oh God bring us an easy way to meet the end of the destination in this world...dont worry Lyn, everything will be okay, ok! _Soul