If she were a young woman
Her youth would begin to wane,
Her father— of the old school,
Also thinks she's not so cool.
Looking at her present spell,
Nor she looks hot, nor so well,
Look at all scams she's been in,
Her aura rather grey from green,
If she can't gather her grace,
Work hard, lift up fallen face,
Never would have the Web's lure,
The world would have failed for sure.
The lady Web is thirty,
Prime, nor does she look pretty.
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Happenings | 15.03.2019 |
Thanks for liking this ditty on current happenings dear poet.
What a wonderful and insightful poem. Cleverly written as always. Liked the title, Sir. An eyecatcher.
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A thought provoking poem on world wide web(WWW) . As you said in your note it is one of the best creation of man, but it has the poetial for the biggest disaster for mankind. Thanks for sharing.
Wow, what a brilliant poem on WWW! Very interesting and moving. Poet's Note says much about it. I want to cite here...If she can't gather her grace, /Work hard, lift up fallen face, /Never would have the Web's lure, /The world would have failed for sure./The lady Web is thirty, /Prime, nor does she look pretty. Thanks for sharing.10
I had written it for the occasion exactly when the Web turned thirty, but then forgot all about it till today. Well, better late than never as they say. Thank you dear poet.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Indeed the WWW is ailing and facing a caution....a thoughtful write on the present reality of the world and the web.. liked this poem very much
I believe, poems need not always be 'beauty and butterfly, love and despair, and vague poetic expressions neither here nor there. Poems can be meaningful reflecting the current happenings, the prevailing zeitgeist, the mood of time. Thank you for appreciating, because I know such poems may not appeal to larger readership.