The Last Moment Poem by Akhtar Jawad

The Last Moment

Rating: 5.0


That was passed too this one will also be passed by me,
The bridge was cracked at places any how it was crossed by me,
We come in the world to repay our previous debts,
But I am in habit of increasing my loans and thefts,
Ignoring my hidden goodness you are searching my misdeeds,
Oh Angels! Your audit report lacks my poetry of good deeds.
Preparing my soul for a new body with a new heart,
For me a surgery painful for you a work of abstract art,
What a joy is love though it ends in a deadly pain,
For love I shall accept life again and again,
It was just a moment of pain but what on the other bank,
Is there any write or the white paper is totally blank?
Turning your face from me you weep and you cry,
Sweetheart turn your face, in your eyes there is a sky,
Bring your forehead close to me I want to encrypt,
I want to acknowledge your love on a stamped receipt.

This is a translation of the poem آخری وقت by Akhtar Jawad
Saturday, October 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 01 November 2020

'Turning your face from me you weep and you cry, Sweetheart turn your face, in your eyes there is a sky, Bring your forehead close to me I want to encrypt, I want to acknowledge your love on a stamped receipt.' - The poem ends so beautifully! The poem is about the anticipated final moments of the poet's life and the poet wants to encrypt his acknowledgement of love on his beloved's forehead. How sweet a thought that is!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 November 2020

Oh Angels! Your audit report lacks my poetry of good deeds. Preparing my soul for a new body with a new heart, LONG WAIT SIR TILL 2050 ALL SOULS HAVE BEEN BOOKED 10 billions IT'S going to be a long wait for you so till then stay here i wish you do i don't want the world to miss poets like uuuuuuuuuu bless you

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Budhashaya Behera 31 October 2020

Angels can audit the report of poetry. Cracked bridges can gain moment. Life can gain love and peace if we will chant Lord's naem. His name is most merciful.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 31 October 2020

A well scribed poem. Truly poetic...5 stars*****

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