The Last Words Of A Dying Man Poem by Kareem Ayodejih Abeeb
The Last Words Of A Dying Man
Dont be bothered my dears
I must go to meet my fathers
And death has a debt to pay the earth
Shed tears if you will
You may bring life from my death through the earth
Miss me if you must
But my soul needs its rest
Say your goodbyes now
For death is pacing with impatience
And I can understand his pain
I can see my end in the near
You may leave if you wish and not watch
'I cant feel my legs! my arms!
Is it night? Its all so dark!
Call the doctor, I...'
Hey, this is quite good Kareem, Yes Quite Good! Very impressive for a young man of your age... keep writing... always be writing... never stop.! Great Write! ! ! ; -) -Kelly
Finally abeeb writes. Nice poem with much room for improvement
you write very well. a great poet in the making. join me on FB introduce you to poetry groups. persian khushi
Good poem.'Keep writing cos I know it is not time to say good night despite the odds
This is actually good, very well structured you pretty talented, don't ever stop writing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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please, I would like everyone that reads this poem to tell me how good or bad it is.Thanks!