Life is on the move
Thursday,27th August 2020
Something to feel
and more to fill
In loneliness
when appears the critical phase
then language comes to rescue
I view the grief from within
I see the effect
it is the silent transformation
when I am alone!
and no one is side by
I try for the recollection of memory
I feel so nice to carry it
sometimes, I look at the stars
it gives me pleasure even if they are very far
it reminds me of two people
my parent who struggled so much
it drags me into the past
and incidences slowly disappear or last
with no unpleasant clouds to cast
life is moving very fast
Dr Jadia Hasmukh
Nice one Sir. Enjoy the lonely moments, away from all the comments.
Poem: 59062093 - The Life Is On The Move Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: We feel something and we feel better. We play our drama. We reap fruits as per karma. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance. This is excellent poem...10
Poem: 59062093 - The Life Is On The Move Member: Bernard F. Asuncion Comment: A well composed exceptional poem. Truly sensible...10++++ Date & Time: 8/28/2020 12: 50: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 59062093 - The Life Is On The Move Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: We feel something and we feel better. We play our drama. We reap fruits as per karma. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance. This is excellent poem...10
Nice way to remember parents and their sacrifices, I liked the way your poem picked the flow. sometimes, I look at the stars it gives me pleasure even if they are very far it reminds me of two people my parents who struggled so much
A well composed exceptional poem. Truly sensible...10+++++++
We feel something and we feel better. We play our drama. We reap fruits as per karma. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance. This is excellent poem...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
t with no unpleasant clouds to cast life is moving very fast Dr Jadia Hasmukh