The Life Is On The Move Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Life Is On The Move

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Life is on the move
Thursday,27th August 2020

Something to feel
and more to fill
In loneliness
when appears the critical phase

then language comes to rescue
I view the grief from within
I see the effect
it is the silent transformation

when I am alone!
and no one is side by
I try for the recollection of memory
I feel so nice to carry it

sometimes, I look at the stars
it gives me pleasure even if they are very far
it reminds me of two people
my parent who struggled so much

it drags me into the past
and incidences slowly disappear or last
with no unpleasant clouds to cast
life is moving very fast

Dr Jadia Hasmukh

The Life Is On The Move
Thursday, August 27, 2020
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 August 2020

t with no unpleasant clouds to cast life is moving very fast Dr Jadia Hasmukh

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Deluke Muwanigwa 27 August 2020

Nice one Sir. Enjoy the lonely moments, away from all the comments.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2020

Poem: 59062093 - The Life Is On The Move Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: We feel something and we feel better. We play our drama. We reap fruits as per karma. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance. This is excellent poem...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 28 August 2020

Poem: 59062093 - The Life Is On The Move Member: Bernard F. Asuncion Comment: A well composed exceptional poem. Truly sensible...10++++ Date & Time: 8/28/2020 12: 50: 00 AM Remove this comment Poem: 59062093 - The Life Is On The Move Member: Kumarmani Mahakul Comment: We feel something and we feel better. We play our drama. We reap fruits as per karma. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance. This is excellent poem...10

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M Asim Nehal 28 August 2020

Nice way to remember parents and their sacrifices, I liked the way your poem picked the flow. sometimes, I look at the stars it gives me pleasure even if they are very far it reminds me of two people my parents who struggled so much

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 August 2020

A well composed exceptional poem. Truly sensible...10+++++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 28 August 2020

We feel something and we feel better. We play our drama. We reap fruits as per karma. This poem is very amazingly penned with much brilliance. This is excellent poem...10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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