The Link Of Destiny Poem by Sreekala Sukumaran

The Link Of Destiny

Rating: 5.0


When we saw for the first time,
Just knowing him as a kinsman
Was just yearning to find out,
Who this handsome lad was,
So asked my beloved sister,
And she nodded with a pretty smile.

When we met for the first time,
Talking with care and affection,
Feeling of sincerity in his wordings,
That poured from his true heart,
Was able to enjoy it to the best,
Indeed it was a memorable day…

We exchanged friendly letters,
And kept good communication,
Likes and dislike all well written
In his bold and legible handwriting,
Liked him more for what he was,
And thus we became close….

After long eight months we met again,
Eagerly waiting to see his smiling face,
Wanting to hear his heart throbbing voice,
A sweet feeling of getting closer,
Cherished those lovely moments,
Wished the day would never end….

Lovely late evening he came beside,
Just handed me a small piece of paper,
In a simple way his wish was conveyed,
No words to describe my happiness,
Felt as though I was in heaven,
Life has given me the best partner...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

you sure happy with your life.. i think you made right choices! nice write!

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Ravi Sathasivam 18 May 2010

'No words to describe my happiness, Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner... ' Nice write....and life has given you the best partner All the best. Good poem Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Ravi Sathasivam 18 May 2010

No words to describe my happiness, Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner... ' Nice write....and life has given you the best partner All the best. Good poem Enjoyed reading it Thanks for sharing with me

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Bob Densmore 18 May 2010

Well written and meaningful. Is it a link of destiny?

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Flowething emotion…culminated in coveted eventuality…Best Partner Voted 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dr Antony Theodore 24 November 2015

Life has given me the best partner... absolutely a lovely poem of love and romance. your expectation came true. how lovely! ! ! thank you. tony

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Amrit Rathi 14 June 2010

This is how love builds on...starting with very little expectations..gradually understanding each other..adjusting and matching, and finally meeting with glowing emotions. NOT showing what we are not, like in most failed marriages after tumultuous love affairs glaring with very high expectations right from the beginning. I rate it 10+ WELL DONE!

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Gita Ashok 08 June 2010

Lovely late evening he came beside, Just handed me a small piece of paper, In a simple way his wish was conveyed, No words to describe my happiness, Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner... Beautiful! All that begins well ends well. We should just have an open mind, believe in ourselves and say a prayer from the depth of our heart and the best will come to us sooner or later.

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Lalitha iyer 31 May 2010

long after one night when silence dawned upon and birds dozed off when the seconds of clock failed to click and wake up me quick when i heard not a whisper and hearkened not for a whimper he sailed smoothly across the whispering skies and starred into the nights gazing me emptily................

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Dr.subhendu Kar 23 May 2010

Felt as though I was in heaven, Life has given me the best partner. and love sways like grin in green yet it flows ingraining blue divine, heart mellows by gentle breath and heaves sigh of relief as when entwined, souls rejoices being in unison, most passionate, and evocative too by imagery and metaphors,10+++, thanks for sharing

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