The Loss Of My Father Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

The Loss Of My Father

Rating: 4.8


today words escape me
I am sad beyond them
my world will pause today
and I will ache
my soul cries out every fiber of my being longs
for just one more touch
just one more hug
one more kiss from my father.
my heart breaks.
I miss him.

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Poignant, " just one more hug //one more kiss from my father. // my heart breaks. " touches my heart

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Ernestine Northover 11 January 2006

My Father left us in the blink of an eye, in the tick of a second. A very sad moment, someone you have relied on all through your childhood, is gone, and suddenly you have to do a lot of growing up. A very moving write. love Ernestine XXX

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