The Loving Girl Poem by Md. Naeem Aziz

The Loving Girl

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A girl i saw in my dream,
Black long hair she has, like a queen.
The eyes of the girl is black,
Mountain is the place she love.

The girl wants to live, beside the sea
But never went, to the heart of the sea.
The girl love to see the Moon,
Moon lover is her tune.

The girl wants to travel the world,
For this, she wants to be the bird.
The girl i saw in my dream,
Black long hair she has, like a queen.

Thursday, October 6, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: mountain,sea,moon,travel,dream,dream girl,bird,Poem ,queen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terence Craddock 27 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'Words That Enrich Create Better Lives A Better World', inspired by a comment I made on the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Terence Craddock 07 April 2023

the girl seen in a dream, with long black hair like a queen, is the spirit of the mountain the sea the moon, that wants to adventure travel the world like a bird

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Terence Craddock 20 January 2024

The poem 'The Girl Seen In A Dream' is the original poem I wrote inspired by this comment I made on the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Terence Craddock 20 January 2024

The poem 'It Is A Joy To Write A Poem', is the original poem I wrote inspired by a comment I made on the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Terence Craddock 12 April 2023

I wrote the poem 'The Girl Travels To Time Far Distance Places', inspired by the poem 'The Loving Girl', by the poet Md. Naeem Aziz and dedicated to Md. Naeem Aziz.

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Pallavi Tripathi 07 April 2023

You kept the mystery going by never revealing whether you actually got her or not

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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 06 March 2023

The girl of your dream, your heart. Nice write. Much expressive

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